The Adventurous Land and the half blood Man: Having the Elixir

July 12, 2009 at 10:27 am 7 comments

by Shivansh J

by Shivansh J



In the dark zone on the lonely place of the barren land was an area of thick forest. This land of Crizol as they called it was a land of fear and horror.

 Here lived a family and might I add a happy family.

 One Sunday morning Joe and Ale had a fierce fight and as a punishment their step mother told them to go to the dense and extremely thick forest. Silently Joe and Ale walked out of the house. When they reached the forest a vicious lion was ready to eat them for brunch, what a great way to start the day.

 They got scared and jumped into a downstream. That stream then….. changed their lives.

 They reached an enormous place. There was a sign post outside the place.

 On it was inscribed,

                       “Wolveric made by Stiffen Jones”.

 “Hey”, said Joe, “Stiffen Jones is our ancestor”.

 They met their ancestor’s assistant Romania.

 She quoted, “Stiffen had made an elixir which could get a dead man with half blood back to life. A man named Crewin Hawk he is the man with half blood and he has stolen the elixir but he does not know that the heart beat scan of the great great great great great  children of Stiffen who you’ll are, has to go in it then only it can be activated .Now you children have to take back the elixir from him. Oh I almost forgot that Crewin can transform himself into a serpent and a wizard who has one eye. I do not know more secrets of this place. Stiffen had made a secret tree which shall open when you say ‘Elton mat’ .In that tree are the secrets of this place”.

 After they reached the core of the tree they came across a lab having a computer which had all the secrets of Wolveric. They researched and through the speed of technology, now knew everything about Wolveric.

 “Now go home your mother will be getting worried I shall call you’ll after half month and by that time I shall make one weapon only with that weapon you can kill Crewin .His son is coming back from Formica city .Bye till that time ”, said Romania.

 After they reached home their mother was angry with them “where were you’ll, I searched the whole forest I did not find you’ll. Now eat your dinner and go to sleep”, she said.

 After 15 days Romania called them back to Wolveric and said “The weapon is ready”.

 It looked like a machine gun. “Crewin and his son have entered Wolveric” said Romania. “And now they are trying to destroy Wolveric because the Elixir is not working.” Now they reached Wolveric and Romania handed over the weapon to Joe and Ale. “The weapon can only used once, use it to kill Crewin”, said Romania.

 They began to search for Crewin and his son.  They heard noises coming from the inner head quarters. They went in the direction where the noise was coming from. On the way they came across  an animal which had a head of a lion and the body of a human.

 It seemed as if it was ready to kill them. It ran after them Ale said “Use the weapon” “No” said Joe “It can only be used once and we have to use it to kill Crewin” by that time a unicorn came along and gave a fierce weapon  to Ale and  voice came from it “Use it to kill the animal. From your true friend Romania”. Ale fired the weapon and that animal died.  

 They continued their task to save Wolveric. At last they came across Crewin and his son Joe said “You kill his son and I’ll manage this evil wizard”.

 They had a fierce fight and Ale broke her bone. She then fainted .The son came and helped his father. Then Ale woke up and snatched the elixir from Crewin.

 Just as Ale snatched it, Joe fired the weapon and that was the end of Crewin. His son warned the two kids “I shall take my revenge”, he cried. The two kids then went back to Romania gave her the elixir and the two weapons. She said “you’ll fought so brave for the Elixir, as a reward I am giving it to you’ll. Come back next year”, she said.

 Then they went home and waited for next year.

 Till then, adios!

 Shivansh J


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7 Comments Add your own

  • 1. A.K.J.  |  July 12, 2009 at 2:53 pm

    Dear Shivu,
    Good story, very fast paced,it appears you read and watch lots of cartoons which have time frame to finish the episode.
    Very brilliant first attempt, keep it up.
    I look forward for the continuation of the adventures of Joe and Ale.
    God bless you.

  • 2. shivansh juneja  |  July 12, 2009 at 5:46 pm

    @ A.K.J:


    Thank you . The next part is coming very soon 🙂


  • 3. Karishma  |  July 12, 2009 at 5:50 pm

    Hey shivu

    awesome story … very adventurous … and fast .. keeps one wondering whats hapenning whats going to happen next .. kepp writing and posting your work here … its a treat to read 🙂

    Take care


  • 4. Eesha  |  July 12, 2009 at 5:53 pm

    Hey shivansh

    Nice story i loved it !
    I would like to read it again and again 🙂 and i look forward to help you in the other parts of the story 🙂


  • 5. Rashi  |  July 12, 2009 at 5:59 pm

    Outstanding .. the suspense created in each line makes u want to read ahead .. almost felt like being a part of them .. waiting for more
    God Bless you 🙂
    Take care

  • 6. Daksh  |  July 13, 2009 at 12:20 pm


    this story is so exciting to read ya …. really great 🙂

    looking forward for the upcoming episodes of Joe and Ale

    keep posting


  • 7. Moksh Juneja  |  July 13, 2009 at 2:33 pm

    this super awesome.. i am actullly looking forward to the next part what would the next adenture of Joe and Ale, will they more challenging dangers or what?? looking forward to the next story…

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